tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post8476403516004731148..comments2023-10-05T04:22:58.177-07:00Comments on In A Bookshelf: Book Beginnings: A Lovely, Indecent DepartureChris Thompsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16995942558585642314noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post-32754472410726614742012-08-27T07:20:40.340-07:002012-08-27T07:20:40.340-07:00It looks like just the first page is in second per...It looks like just the first page is in second person. Otherwise that would be unusual, and awkward. Thanks for stopping by, Mark!Chris Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16995942558585642314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post-68769753035285772002012-08-26T20:37:26.963-07:002012-08-26T20:37:26.963-07:00Is the entire novel in 2nd person? That would be ...Is the entire novel in 2nd person? That would be unusual.Mark Muratahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03562597698193306363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post-58772163779284865912012-08-24T12:15:43.740-07:002012-08-24T12:15:43.740-07:00I really want to read this!I really want to read this!CarpeDiemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15576648479456951407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post-89610331125140991462012-08-24T10:23:17.856-07:002012-08-24T10:23:17.856-07:00That's an interesting opening because the stor...That's an interesting opening because the story could go anywhere from there. <br /><br />Thanks for including your post in BBOF!Gilion at Rose City Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18080293172467000794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post-85619177186522870392012-08-24T09:37:53.094-07:002012-08-24T09:37:53.094-07:00Now I am curious...and yes, that is an intriguing ...Now I am curious...and yes, that is an intriguing way to tell the story.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing...and for visiting my blog.Laurel-Rain Snowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00101090217639410913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post-22581977114910010232012-08-24T09:16:50.649-07:002012-08-24T09:16:50.649-07:00Great beginning. I'd like to know how the narr...Great beginning. I'd like to know how the narrator knows the girl is "not one of them." What sets her apart?<br />My Book Beginning is from <a href="http://iousex.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Memories.</a><br />Sandra Nachlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906884446237370105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post-50167680285362974442012-08-24T08:54:57.162-07:002012-08-24T08:54:57.162-07:00Most intriguing beginning. I want to look into the...Most intriguing beginning. I want to look into the book now.Nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15547916206007733970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post-76928640491213948072012-08-24T08:07:24.653-07:002012-08-24T08:07:24.653-07:00I really like it and it's almost sweet, apart ...I really like it and it's almost sweet, apart from the excluding her. And I like the cover! Also, I don't think the Iliad is repetitive perse, it is just that a lot of comparisons and phrases were standard and therefore used a lot. :) Thanks for stopping by and I hope you have a great weekend!<br />JuliJuli Rahelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15367150240867758577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post-81373069741909665662012-08-24T07:56:01.103-07:002012-08-24T07:56:01.103-07:00I don't know who the speaker is, a character i...I don't know who the speaker is, a character in the book or the omniscient narrator, but I can tell he or she is not a sympathetic character! Nice beginning.Harveehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03490108303790217277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post-70130344108803261302012-08-24T07:36:05.190-07:002012-08-24T07:36:05.190-07:00I like that beginning. It draws you in to the sce...I like that beginning. It draws you in to the scene. Thanks for visiting my blog.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211969111265868996.post-3316900388800263222012-08-24T07:24:17.237-07:002012-08-24T07:24:17.237-07:00Nice choice. Thanks for visiting.Nice choice. Thanks for visiting.JC Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00465446051021667245noreply@blogger.com